Three Words enough to break your heart
Do you remember the very day we met On winter's day when the sun had set The stars had come out in time to see Three words that would change our history ****************** And as we walked along the moon river Holding words that I would hold no longer I knew it was time a moment of choice To raise the words of my heart to voice ***************** It's hard to explain harder to say But I would not be a victim of fear today Because when I looked deep in your eyes I knew that this time would be mine *************** And I would never ever say it differently When all my words fit my dreams so perfectly There was no regret when I said it then For it was the truth of the love I send |
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BESTZ1 thank you for your nice feeling about my poem
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You Just Broke my Heart like with this, *8sooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet words |
how sweeeeet *3thank you and keep up the good work we enjoy it oh and u meant ( three words enough to break ur heart) |
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Sarafina !!3 CU |
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شمعـــة الــدور !!8 CU |
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WILL SADNES HAS ME AT THE END OF THE LINE BUT YOU KNOW WHAT ? IT'S SOO TRUE AND THANKS ABOUT IT DEAR BYE ((B)) |
Oh, my brother........you did well........your words are strong in meaning,coming hardly from your feelings.
but ,there is something wrong. you made some grammer mistakes,you've to do some improvements.I look forward to see you again.Thanx Your brother The Broken Heart...............Buy |
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The BrokenHeart
Could you please, tell me what are the mistakes that you found???x thanQ |
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