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SophisticateD 18-08-2003 08:03 PM

Three Words enough to break your heart
 
Do you remember the very day we met
On winter's day when the sun had set
The stars had come out in time to see
Three words that would change our history
******************
And as we walked along the moon river
Holding words that I would hold no longer
I knew it was time a moment of choice
To raise the words of my heart to voice
*****************
It's hard to explain harder to say
But I would not be a victim of fear today
Because when I looked deep in your eyes
I knew that this time would be mine
***************
And I would never ever say it differently
When all my words fit my dreams so perfectly
There was no regret when I said it then
For it was the truth of the love I send

BESTZ1 20-08-2003 10:35 AM

too nice

thank you

SophisticateD 20-08-2003 11:48 AM

WELCOME
 
BESTZ1 thank you for your nice feeling about my poem

Sarafina 21-08-2003 08:37 PM

OHHHHHHHHH
 
You Just Broke my Heart like with this,
sooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet words
*8

شمعـــة الــدور 25-08-2003 03:19 AM

how sweeeeet
thank you
and keep up the good work
we enjoy it
oh and u meant ( three words enough to break ur heart)
*3

SophisticateD 25-08-2003 04:31 PM

thanx
 
thanx

Sarafina
!!3 CU

SophisticateD 25-08-2003 04:33 PM

THANx
 
thanx

شمعـــة الــدور

!!8 CU

britney spears 25-08-2003 07:47 PM

WoOoW
WILL SADNES HAS ME AT THE END OF THE LINE
BUT YOU KNOW WHAT ?
IT'S SOO TRUE AND THANKS ABOUT IT DEAR

BYE

((B))

The BrokenHeart 31-08-2003 10:59 AM

Oh, my brother........you did well........your words are strong in meaning,coming hardly from your feelings.
but ,there is something wrong.
you made some grammer mistakes,you've to do some improvements.I look forward to see you again.Thanx
Your brother The Broken Heart...............Buy

SophisticateD 31-08-2003 05:29 PM

thanQ
 
The BrokenHeart

Could you please, tell me what are the mistakes that you found???x

thanQ


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