Sorry bro I'm using your work to do main:D
Hey sis,
I believe hammam did a good job
but we can add some touches here and there.
any way
You know sis to give a very good presentation you need to get the audience attention with unexpected phrase or fact.
Your audiences should be shocked from the first sentence.
Let us say like
Intro
We need to act fast our kids in danger. As the time moves on the world become a global village because of the internet access increases –in another words it is hard to find a house without an internet access-.
Body:
To see the Picture more the internet as virtual world has everything as real world. Our kids can find bad places with bad people which may effect there studies and mentally health by spending hours and hours behind the screen. In the other hand our kids can find allot of nice places there may help them to live batter life –e.g. researches etc.-.
Conclusion
As a result of that the access to the Internet for our kids need to be controlled exactly as we controlling there movement in the real life. Let us help our kids to live a batter life by using the Internet.
I hope you like it...
Any way it is just an example....
if you need more asistance well we can give ya a hand.
Cheers
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